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This is a redux of the comic I had earlier called Fade to Black. After looking over where the plot I made for it was going, I didn't like what I had. So, I decided to restart it. If you want a cameo appearance as either a civilian or a random henchmen (this does not necessarily mean you will be evil; just under someone's employment), PM with your sprites. I will accept all sprite styles and characters so long as I don't get blinded by looking at it.


Help for the Weak

May 8th, 2009, 8:31 am

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Reply Shadow The Unborn, May 8th, 2009, 10:55 am

*looks at profile*...

I think you should look at this before you go another step:
http://www.mgcomics.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25947

But if you want her to kill, that's fine...

Reply Slapshot, May 8th, 2009, 5:55 pm

Thank you for the link. I'll get to editing the profile page soon to fix that.

Reply SeveX, May 9th, 2009, 12:50 am

Crit Well overrall, I don't really like the style you have for the comic, I pretty sure you can make one pannel that are the size of two, but meh. Anyways, for you speech bubbles, it throws the comic off wack so I suggest you make them in paint, or atleast try to be "cleaner" with them.

Overall nice comic, but you should use different idle poses to show better emotion.

Reply Slapshot, May 9th, 2009, 1:19 pm

I didn't exactly have a lot to work with as far as idles were concerned. JUS and SA/B sprites by themselves are shit for regular idle stances unless you want to make some yourself. Since these guys are only here for the beginning, I didn't think it would be worth the effort to do little more than recolor them.

Thanks for the criticism though. I'll try for some more narrow panels and clean up the speech bubbles for the next issue, or at least try to figure out what the hell I did to make the speech bubbles in the introduction.

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