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This is a redux of the comic I had earlier called Fade to Black. After looking over where the plot I made for it was going, I didn't like what I had. So, I decided to restart it. If you want a cameo appearance as either a civilian or a random henchmen (this does not necessarily mean you will be evil; just under someone's employment), PM with your sprites. I will accept all sprite styles and characters so long as I don't get blinded by looking at it.


Gangs These Days

May 16th, 2009, 3:23 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply Slapshot, May 16th, 2009, 3:33 pm

In response to a little bit of criticism I got from SeveX, I decided to do some experimenting on a more clean style of bubble. Overall, I think it was a success. The bubbles and font used in this issue will be the ones I'm going with stick with from now on.

Now for a small shout out to Blaze2Fire. I made a few more sprites of your character so I would have a bit more to work with, so if you want them, PM me.

That's all I got for now. Criticism and people for cameos are still wanted.

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User's Comments:

Reply Shadow The Unborn, May 16th, 2009, 3:30 pm

I liked the last set of bubbles you used...Not only are these hard to read cause of the heads, but the tails aren't there anymore...This is a giant step backwards...

Reply Slapshot, May 16th, 2009, 3:50 pm

Now that you mention it, I can see what you mean about the heads. However, I'm not going to bring back the tails unless there is no other option. They took up way too much room and brought up a lot of placement issues that I'm tired of fighting with. I'll try find a better way of identifying which boxes belong to which character than the heads, but I want to avoid tails if I can help it from now on.

Reply Bratchan, May 16th, 2009, 5:11 pm

Yah the text bubbles really bug me. I can't read half of whats written. Reason for Tails so you don't have to play the matching game in every panel. The goal its to make it flow tail guides the eye to the character, but If you want to stay with faces I would fix it so you can read what is being said.

Reply Dark the Ninja, May 17th, 2009, 3:55 pm

Hmmm?!

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